falling in love

This sounds like this could become an interesting story. There are a few spelling errors here and there where you left out letters or added some. It seems to be ...

I loved it. Like Jennafish said, it is the cutest little vampire story I've ever read. When you put this part:..... “Eros,” I whispered, pushing him so that he lay ...

It's good. I really enjoy this so far, but I think maybe I have missed some of the story. If I haven't then maybe you should add in what's going ...

[quote]Intestines and stomach and lungs and liver, The line above is killer. Here, I imagine a man down on one knee holding a ring and proposing to his girlfriend saying ...